Hi everyone today we have been writing about our favourite pet. This is what I wrote:
I was one of the people that chose dogs for 4 good reasons.
thank you for checking my blog.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
You've got some super reasons Marcus.I would have to pick a horse as my favourite pet.I remember when my mum and dad got me one for Christmas.
ReplyDeleteDo you have any pets at home?.
We have 1 dog,3 birds and a cat.
Hi Marcus, I'm impressed with your writing and your story, I am very proud of you boy-Mom
ReplyDeleteWe'll get you a dog some point.-Dad
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