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Saturday, March 27, 2021

Marcus the present

 Last week on Sunday I was watching some Netflix episodes and movies.  

I was almost done with the Kong King of the apes episodes. I was at the last episode my goal 

Was to watch all the episodes and movies on Netflix.

But when I was almost done with the last episode Mum came back from work, with a big box

In her hands. She put it on the table “ mom your interrupting me” I sighed. “Won't You stop watching netflix  and open the present I gave you” she said happily.

 I opened the box and I was a puppy. I was relieved for a bit until I found out it had three legs. “ Mum seriously.”I shouted gumpily. When It was upside down it opened its eyes and saw a red ball. 

It ran under the cupboard and the puppy grabbed the ball in its jaws.

The puppy came to give me the ball. I chased after the ball. It played with the ball for a long time.

I tried to ignore the puppy but I was too cute when it was playing  with the ball.

When I was thinking about the puppy, I decided to play with the dog outside.

So I took a break from Netflix and went to play with the dog outside. “ Mum, we will be outside,” I said brightfully. I played fetch happily with the dog outside. After that I played with the dog almost every day. 


                                                  The end.




 


2 comments:

  1. Hello Marcus.
    I can see you have used some really good describing words.It made your story more interesting.
    I'm glad that you and the puppy became friends.It couldn't have been easy for the puppy coming into a new home.
    If you did have a 3 legged dog what name would yo give it?.

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  2. Beautiful story, wondering what wa sthe name od the puppy and what were his colours?

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