We have been learning to write recounts in the stile of a newspaper reporter.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, April 16, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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What a great story Marcus.You've included some good describing words that made your story interesting to read.
ReplyDeleteWhat do you think would of happened if the villagers didn't turn up?.
Have a wonderful holiday.
Talofa Marcus I like your newspaper because you have got alot of just describing words.I love the writing too
ReplyDeleteI am proud of you Marcus, you are really good storyteller. What kind of lanterns does the villagers have?
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