I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, August 31, 2021
Thursday, August 12, 2021
Marcus Narrative
One rainy night my parents and I moved into a new house. I was very nervous, and did not want to leave the city for that long . I was walking along when I noticed something strange. “ Well ,Well I did not know we had this type of mirror,” I mumbled in confusion .
But this was no ordinary mirror that most people are used to.
This one was very shiny and no wonder it’s frame was made of painites , and it was extremely tough. l picked up the largest rock I could find and chucked it with all my force. Crash! But the mirror made the rock shatter. I knew something was not right, I reached and gently felt the mirror and just like that I vanished and got sucked inside.
Crash!... It was the next day and I woke up from my sleep and met an alien who showed me around the place. He told me that there was a demon who had been wiping out his species for years.
We both agreed to go and find the demon and stop him from wiping out the alien kind. We went to search out the demon’s layer ,it was a very tough journey. The alien kept asking for water every two minutes.
“ I need water ,what! I just gave you water like one to two minutes ago. I know, we get dehydrated very quickly. He
also gobbled up half of the food in half an hour. “ Hmm I'm quite hungry, I guess I should eat now and, …….wait where did all the food go?
ALIEN! What did I not see?
“Hey Marcus. ” “What ?”
“ Do mountains move like that one behind you”ground rumbles….. “WORLD TORTOISE !" roarrrr To be continued