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Thursday, August 12, 2021

Marcus Narrative

  One  rainy night my parents and I moved into a new house. I was very nervous,  and did not want to leave the city for that long .  I was walking along when  I noticed something strange.  “ Well ,Well I did not know we had this type  of  mirror,” I mumbled in confusion . 

But this was  no ordinary mirror that most people are used to.


This one was very shiny and no wonder it’s frame was made of painites , and it was extremely tough.  l  picked up the largest rock I could find and chucked it with all my force. Crash! But the mirror made the rock shatter.  I knew something was not right, I reached and gently felt the mirror  and just like that  I vanished and got sucked inside.


   Crash!... It  was the next day and I woke up from my sleep and  met an alien  who showed me around the place. He told me that there was a demon who had been wiping out his species for years.


We both agreed to go and find the demon and stop him from wiping out the alien kind. We went to search out the demon’s layer ,it was a very tough journey. The alien kept asking for water every two minutes. 


“ I need water ,what! I just gave you water like one to two minutes ago. I know, we get dehydrated  very quickly.  He

also  gobbled up half of the food in half an hour. “ Hmm I'm quite hungry,  I guess  I should  eat now and, …….wait where did all the food  go?

 ALIEN! What did I not see? 

“Hey Marcus. ” “What ?”  

“ Do mountains move like that one behind you”ground rumbles….. “WORLD   TORTOISE  !" roarrrr To be continued 


5 comments:

  1. Oh! Very interesting ideas Marcus.
    I wonder what will happen next. Well done for writing an interesting narrative.

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  2. I like that you used paragraphs and punctuation Marcus.
    It made reading your post easy.Well done.

    I am in suspense now..I am looking forward to the next chapter of this story.

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  3. Good morning Marcus.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
    Take care and keep safe.

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  4. Good morning Marcus....have a wonderful day.Take care,keep safe and warm.

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  5. Good afternoon Marcus.It was great seeing you at Goggle Meet this morning.How are your holidays going?.
    I have been busy doing odd little jobs around the house.

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